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How To Write a Hook

July 21, 2010 By Linda K Sienkiewicz

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One Electrifying Sentence:

A hook encapsulates a book in one electrifying sentence. It will grab the attention of agents, editors, publishers, bookstore managers and clerks, bloggers, journalists, reviewers and readers. So how do you write a hook? Michael Kimball and Stonecoast Alumna Bix Skahill have a simple formula they call The Art of the Hook:

  1. Start with a protagonist. Use an adjective to describe the protagonist that will elicit emotion.
  2. Add your protagonist’s goal.
  3. Next, name the conflict, such as an unwinnable war or impossible task.

For multiple characters or plotlines, pick what best conveys the most emotion in your story. Create empathy with an adjective for your protagonist (i.e. unwitting attorney, guilty clown, angst-ridden teen), and then put the protagonist in jeopardy. Give the protagonist strong motivation to win, stop, escape, retrieve or conquer whatever the conflict is. Use loaded words and be specific.

One example was: To save his best friend’s life, a boy scholar must win a war between magic and machine. The fact that the protagonist is a boy elicits empathy, especially a boy in a war. That he’s also a scholar creates interest. His goal is to save a best friend’s life, no less. How can one boy possibly win a war between magic and machine?

My attempts

The workshop split into groups and I shared what I had: In THE REAL STORY, a woman must look to her past before she can face the future after discovering she is at the core of a horrible family secret. My fellow writers were less than enthusiastic. It was vague and squishy. It lacks a clear protagonist (just a woman) and a clear goal (she has to face the future?) and there wasn’t any conflict… unless you consider looking to the past as conflict, but that’s pretty weak.

The second hook I came up with was: In THE REAL STORY, a young woman whose life is shattered after learning she was conceived in violence must shed her self destructive ways before she can rebuild herself. Mike said it was too general, and suggested I make it more specific and evoke a sense of impossibility regarding her desire.

Now I have: In THE REAL STORY, a self-destructive young woman must make peace with the fact that her birthfather is a rapist to find the strength to leave her felon husband and learn to love again. I don’t know if the conflict is strong enough, but I think I’m getting closer.

If you’ve read any dynamite hooks worth sharing, or have one of your own that you’d like to share, please comment!



Linda K. Sienkiewicz is the author of In the Context of Love, about one women’s need to tell her story without shame. Publisher: Buddhapuss Ink, LLC in the context of love book

2016 Sarton Women’s Fiction Finalist
2016 Eric Hoffer Book Award Finalist
2016 Readers Favorite Book Finalist
2016 USA Book News “Best Book” Finalist

Angelica Schirrick had always suspected there was something deeply disturbing about her family, but the truth was more than she bargained for.

“With tenderness, but without blinking, Linda K. Sienkiewicz turns her eye on the predator-prey savannah of the young and still somehow hopeful.” ~ Jacquelyn Mitchard, author of the #1 NY Times Bestseller, Deep End of the Ocean

“At once a love story, a cautionary tale, and an inspirational journey.” ~ Bonnie Jo Campbell, author of National Book Award Finalist, American Salvage, and critically acclaimed Once Upon a River,and Mothers, Tell Your Daughters

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Your Query: Plot or Character Driven?

March 13, 2010 By Linda K Sienkiewicz

I found a terrific blog post on query letters written by Lynn Price, the editorial director for Behler Publications. Lynn says if you can define your story as either plot driven or character driven it … Continue reading >>

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Sales Pitch- Query Letters

February 3, 2010 By Linda K Sienkiewicz

What You Need Upfront: A typical query letter starts out with a hook, which is followed by the most important information an agent wants to know upfront: genre and word count. The Pitch: The next … Continue reading >>

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Find an Agent without Losing Your Mind- The Query Process

January 31, 2010 By Linda K Sienkiewicz

Yes, I made a pact to query 100 agents before I would quit! In fact, I probably would have kept on going had I not gotten two offers of representation by the time I hit 83 queries. (see Query 100 … Continue reading >>

Filed Under: Agents & Querying, Publicity & Marketing Tagged With: Agents, Fiction, novel, queries, research agents

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Award- winning writer, poet & artist. Cynical optimist. Super klutz. Corgi fan. Author of two novels, a picture book which she wrote and illustrated, and five poetry chapbooks. More here.

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